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Friday, August 10, 2018

Favourite place in the school
I hear birds singing in my ear. Sand flies across my face.


I love the smell of the breeze. Wind crashing in my face.

The tree feels like flossy solid metal. I hear builders building on top my head.

Massive like a dinosaur

Hanging on the tree hands falling hand red so steep almost.falling wind blowing. Hear airplanes flying over me tree leaves falling on my head.









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  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2018 at 10:01 AM

    Hi moleli I am Alexis and i'm from st francis of assisi school I really liked how you said all of the senses and I liked how you described it. I also liked how you told us how to write a comment. Also I have a question what is your favorite place of the school?

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